Comments : Perfect becomes crashing

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Wow that was good i loved the flow in this one also. it was great. keep up the work!
    5/5 always
    Kate

  • 16 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Wow, amazing.
    You just keep suprizing me.
    Sorry i haven't been on to comment you,
    i've been very busy.
    Your poem was brillant.

    -Amberinaa.
    xoxox.
    Much love darling.

  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Gooood job dude,good job dude..5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by megan

    You are writing one excellent poem after another...you must have great inspiration lately!!