Comments : Piece of me

  • 18 years ago

    by dawn green

    Very nice write! keep up the good work!
    god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Nice poem but i think you need to expand a bit (no offence) such as

    I used to associate
    you with Happiness
    and everything else,
    that brought a smile or a tear'

    instead of
    I used to associate
    you with Happiness
    and all that other
    good stuff...

    but i like the poem

    5/5