Comments : Baby, We Can Make This Work

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    And I wear your jacket all the time
    ^ I think this would sound better without the "I" but that's just my opinion.

    Awhh, thats so sweet hunnyy. I love how much emotion was in such a few simple wordss. We could feel your love and your sadness that he was gonee. I love the descriptions and imagery throughout. Lovely jobb. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Omg Excellent!!!
    i loved it!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Dennis

    I really liked it..
    Good Job