You write well. and i really enjoyed reading
this one as well as ther other. great job.

My day begins with thoughts of you
Racing through my head
As the sun begins to shine through
I think of what we once said

i love this start

My day starts with my heart aching
For the love that I once knew
By the end it starts breaking
As I keep on missing you

the end is soo sweet nd sad but its a great poem!!! xx