This was really good i liked the turn around it was so real. I thought it was a little hard to read though. Maybe im a dumbass lol. One tip...

Your children get their nanny's affection
maybe this would be better
Your children get their nanny's attention

Because then it would sem more liked the children are perhaps 'In the way'

just an idea nice job anyways

xxx alex xxx

Lol....different but perfect n soo true comaprison...u've penned both the sides effectively...n it ws good anyways..
Kp writing!5/5

xxPoojaxx

Wow. i really liked it
u showed 2 sides of the story so well
the poor envy the rich for their money
but the rich envy the poor for the love and truth they hold
and truth and love is always worth more than money
5/5

I love this...
Original and unique in concept, a refreshing read.
I liked how you did the turn around, it is true for so many people, and I'm sureman can relate.
The only thing I would suggest is to try and use less fillers (the, I and, you etc) as sometimes they cn disrupt the flow.
Apart from that however, this was beautiful.

This was rather delightful to read. Having read its thoughtful account/message endears me exceedingly. It reminds me of a similar account about a historian and a governor.

Nice job, nonetheless. Overall, a good effort. =]

-Marian

Absolutely great. I love the 2 sides and how true this poem is! Keep up the good work!

Aww I like the topic about the comparrison on which reeeally has more. Ur reeally in tune with the world aren't you?

An eliminated comparative..different subject and so good vocabulary
The flow keeps you going too

Keep it up,
Laura

This poem is fantastic. Well done!!! You wrote this poem excellently. Topic is superbly good and message is also great. I really enjoyed in this piece. It deserves 5/5

Very useful and meaningful poem with the appropriate flow and lexis used. I like the idea or the imagery behind this piece. 5/5

Tc
Fsams