Wow!!..oOooOo...ool vocab!
Excellent metaphors...it just fits in perfectly...
no favourite line...the whole poem is perfect n very well penned..i loved each n every line....Superb work!
5/5!=)
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

That was really pretty, and beautiful.

5/5

~*Alex*~

Doubtless this piece is superb with an awsome flow n it perfectly rhymes. just 5/5 frm my heart.

With love
Fsams

Very good
i absolutly loved it
your so talented
very nice work
i loved it!

I really liked this one. the flow is very good, and everything is well connected. emotion is conveyed, and provoked. very well done.

A blanket of love, keeps me warm,
In these arms i know its right.

ahhh. this poem touched my heart in a very short poem you have expressed alot of words. this is the talent. your love shines from your eyes. and you realy know its meaning.

best wishes
take care 5/5

Wow great metaphors.. nice poem.. very bootiful ;) keep writing.. luv it.. ^________^ tc aite!.. god bless...

I liked it. But I think it would be better if you were to add to it. The flow was great and word choice was wonderful. I gave it a 5/5.

Ooo the rhyme scheme was cool. you used "tonight" at the end of every stanza, which sounded good as well as rounding it off really nicely. And the second line in every stanza rhymed, too. "fight" "sight" and "right" that was cool i liked that! Kept the whole poem in a neat structure!
well done!
take care
Geo
xoxoxox

I love ur work

Of thte ones you requested me to read, this is soooo far my fav, genuinely superb imagery, mataphors well placed, very emotional and i felt what i needed to feel, which is why i read poetry, ...great job...

I really like this poem, you do write good love poems. It is original and you truly expressed emotions on ,I can honestly say, incredible way. Well done, whole poem has outstanding rhythm. I enjoyed in every line of this greatly written piece.

Now this...this my dear is perfect.

I found the whole piece to be both original and unique in concept and beautifully written.

The depth and emotion you placed into this piece, while relatively short, was overwhelming and clear for the reader to see.

The only thing that I didn't like was that your I's weren't capatilized, but that's just me being picky.

On the whole, I loved this.

This was a great poem in both power and description I really did enjoy the way you set this up great work Plot121