The mystery of this was the one that affected when you first asked for my opinion..I really liked it tracy
Annd obviously it's not raw hun
Keep it up
Your friend,
Laura

The mystery of this was the one that affected when you first asked for my opinion..I really liked it tracy
Annd obviously it's not raw hun
Keep it up
Your friend,
Laura

As always a beautiful write from you that is filled with so much emotion. I agree that by no means was it raw. As I told you before, you have shown in many ways the depth of your poems and that they are straight from your heart. Great Job,
Your Friend,
Kay

Tracy,

I could feel your pain as I read this. Very heartfelt. The flow was good and word usage well done.

Keep writing

Always,
Jeannie

Thx for your comment on my poem im sorry for the mistakes sometimes I struggle with my reading and wrighting so u may find this in a few on my poems.

Deep,Sad.really great writing

Amazing...just amazing. I love your poems. This one is so intensive and dark...

Wow, this poem is written very well. I loved it. Kept me into it the whole time. Great job keep up the amazing work 5/5
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Wow, another one Tracy you really impressing me.
Everything is great, wording, atmosphere and flow. This is deep and excellently written peace. You expressed emotions perfectly.
This poem is powerful.