Wow that was good flow and transition, good words good reasons 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I loved this poem. its was really good!! keep it up. 5/5

Very heart wrecking, i can feel pain from this poem... amazing

-love whitney-

The lines in this are amazing,

'when my body's too weak and my strength isnt strong'

highlights the whole poem and the second stanza flows brilliantly and sounds beautiful.

Almost brought a tear to my eye.

L

5/5 good poem. keep up the great work.