Comments : To my lover...

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    That was was great 5/5 again. it was short but sweet. maybe you should try to write a longer one. but it would look and sound better if you'd done it like this.
    My love for you is strong,
    my love for you is forever long,
    i promise to love you everyday,
    my love for you will forever stay,
    i love you,
    and that is forever true...

    but either way awesome writing

  • 18 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    I can really relate to this!!!! great poem!!! 5/5