Wow.
That took my breath away, the emotion was very strong!
You have a true passion for writing!

Amber

That took my breathe away. There was very strong emotion in it.

That took my breathe away. There was very strong emotion in it.

Boys dont cry micheal u know thats bull cause a story like this would make any one cry and the saddest part is this stuff happens every where all the time. This is an awsome poem. If this really happened to your bf I am sorry for your lose.

Oh wow, that was so unbelievably sad. Abuse of any kind is such a horrible act, but sexual abuse, especially towards a completely innocent child is just... indescribable.

You handled this poem really well. Excellently penned.

Omg, i had no clue what this was about until this line

My Mom holds me by the wrists as my Daddy takes off my pants

i was like :|

Very powerful poem

Good job

5/5