I like the metaphor inside of this. Very much so.
The form was well. The flow was well. I really don't see anything that deserves a bit of constructive criticism.

All I have to say is.. It'd take some mean vocal cords to sing this long of a song. ;]

Take care.

Wow, this is a very good song. I loved it. 5/5
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Girl this stuff is gold u got to get some one to record this I knew what u were saying here I know this to well.

Nice metaphorical take on this. I knew the paint had some reference to makeup, but the pillows, I wasn't sure. It all makes sense now though. :)

Wonderfully written.

Evem though im a guy....I agree with this poem...Alot of guys are a-holes...

I honestly thought the pillows was like...getting at something about a bed...but i got the paint part

I love your choice of words

5/5