Man this is really really good. It described everything that we feel perfectly, the word choice was of course excellent, and the flow was great, the emtion and the inner pain was powerful, and eazy to be seen, yall did a great job on this, as I said in the club post, so this is not the poem I want you to return comments for, this was exceptional work , and repayment is nessarcy. Well written, amazing.

Wow!!...excellent collab...Kudos all 3 of you!...the aim of the club,the reason,the pain,emotions everything styands out in this poem...very well written and powerful write!
Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

Wow.
You all did an amazing job.
One thing though; moulds< molds.

Other than that this is an amazing poem.
I don't really get the first two stanzas, more because I wasn't sure what you meant... like if it was a family doing this, or like society.
But, I believe it could be used as either; after reading.
Because, society does this, and many families do as well.

Amazing job.
loved it.
5/5