I liked how each stanza was short and too the point.
It made the flow really strong.
Also your word use was great and showed you have experience lol.

I liked the idea, Its a sad poem but isn't unoriginal. Thats hard to do, so well done.

The last stanza summed it all up and I love that in a poem.

Goooood work :]

You cannot have a storm,
Without a little rain,
You cannot have a rainbow,
Without a little pain.

^^this is soo true...very well said..it sums up the whole idea behind this poem..
it flowed well..n i like the structure of this one...great work..short stanzas with perfect word choice
Good job!
xxPoojaxx

Honestly?
Your whole poem seems forced and cliched.
I'm tired of reading about tears.
I've read about it too much..

But your "story" my dear?
I liked your first stanza.
Even though it was off and forced.
I liked when it was all.
The sky is falling, cries the hand.
That was very creative of you :P

Thinking what is thought,
Missing what is missed,
Crying what is cried,
Kissing what is kissed,

Love that line.
It was... perfecto

You cannot have a storm,
Without a little rain,
You cannot have a rainbow,
Without a little pain

Hmm... I should take back what I said.
This was.. pretty darn good.
It wasn't the best.
But it was pretty creative.
Tears are always cliched in my eyes.
So when I saw it, I ranted.
Sorry.
You deserve a five, my dear :]

You cannot have a storm,
Without a little rain,
You cannot have a rainbow,
Without a little pain.

These are very beautiful lines to read. The stanzas are very well written and Its enjoyable to read it. Your wordings are really flawless.

Gosh...nice poem..!
^^

This was really amazing. it had it's own unique idea, which was totally not clique or anything. it flowed beautifully as well and had really good descriptions. 5/5
gabriella