Comments : Never Say Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written poem.
    "Floating existence between heaven and hell,
    Tears fall down in an endless well,
    You create happiness, my smile did tell,
    This can not be the end" - amazing stanza.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, love the style and you did a marvelous job on the vocabulary, wonderfully written , great job, Floating existence between heaven and hell,
    Tears fall down in an endless well
    Sweetie I know that feeling very well , thanks for sharing , very enjoyable to read, as always , thanks your friend Tracy d 5/5