Comments : Unconditional love

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Lovely poem. I really liked it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'Unconditional love, is what you provide.' < a bit short.

    same with. 'Meeting you was a dream come true.'

    other than those two lines it's an amazing poem, and i love it. great job, sweetie!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word choice was simple and yet effective, the emtion was stong yet clear, and the flow was great. you did an excellent job. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    U stole my username :[. nice poem though. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Its romanting that was great work take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, this was good hunny. Okay, first of all. The flow was a bit off throughout the poem. Either the rhyme felt forced or the lines did not have the same amount of syllables roughly and this made it sound a bit off. Other than that, the descriptions were good and I could see how much you love this person. My only other suggestion is to break away from the cliche of love and try to explain it in a different way. 4/5 though, nice job.