The begining drew me in, the second staza, lost flow for a brief mooment towrd the end of it, and the flow of the third staza appered to be the same way. The last line to me was perhaps the most powerful line of the entire poem, the wording was great, and the emtion was deep, although I have read a few of your
poems and i think that you are capable of doing better, this was good, honestly and truly A well written peice, the spelling was great, the grammer was perfect, and the punction was amazing. I can't complain there, again great job, 5/5 for you deserve it. I hope this show I really read the poem, but I am not expecting commets in return.

Now this is what i'm talking about. this one has emotion in it. and i can feel what you are feeling. this is beautiful. the last stanza was wonderful. 5/5

xo kisses xo

It..hurt. In a good way lol. Like, as i read it, the words seemed to be creating the pain that the poem was speaking of.
5/5 always :)

Quillx

Ah, love.
this one was very nicely written. it was so into depth and very emotional. i rather liked it a lot mate.
5/5.

You slip away, so far away

its awesome realy nicely done and was true love feelings you realy know what is love and ints meaning.. you have great talent. you can do very well in writing. so i m going to add you in my favourites. takecare 5/5

Very deep! u express ur feelings in a very nice way, metaphorical or poetric style that i really enjoyed! 5/5

INTRESTING:P
xx
*kia*

Wow. This poem was very well done. It made me cry. Lol. Very deep. By about the last line of the first stanza, I was thinking 'this is incredible'. 5/5

This was an absolute beautiful poem dear! I loved reading every single line, it was so sad and full of emotion. Not only were your words beautiful, but your poem is very organized.. the lines aren't all messed up and the reader doesn't have any problem reading it. Great job! =) Keep up the wonderful work 5/5 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Very sad, but beautifully captures the e
emotion. great poem.

This si such a good poem

I like this poem you did a good job to you

Very sad but good

Awesum poem keep up the good work

You have written a beautiful poem. Love the imagery in this piece.

And as our hands begin to part, I try to hold on tight...
You slip away, so far away,... (...Another Lonely Night.)

These lines really moved me.
Excellent !
Take care Cindy

Wow it's been a while since i've written but damn this poem is real nice, as soon as i get time i have to put mine on my page but don't have the time so check mine out sometime.

I agree with Vanessa ^------ up there at the top. you drew me in with the begining, because it was worded correctly, but i kinda lost touch with the second and third. but definatley made a come back with the forth. i'm not saying to remake ur poem to "make it sound better" bcus with me i hate to change a poem i think is so beautiful. but maybe next time, try to make a better flow
-Writer

Awesome!!
Love It!!