Comments : Mystery of Your Soul

  • 16 years ago

    by Gypsy

    Your use of language and rhyme in this is superb, and it flowed really well too.
    The last 2 lines are so very true. All in all a great poem x

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    WOW! That last line is great! We all would rather have the truth, no matter how it hurts, than to live our lives unaware of how others truly feel. Good job!
    *ME*