Awesome a new type of poem i have seen. sweet dude. keep up the good work

Very good poem and it makes a great deal of sense, good point and great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

Loved the ending lines here.

I liked the whole thing, actually. Short but a nice message behind it. Great write. 5/5

Keep writing!

`Liz =]

Wow it great

Hey.. thats really good! I can understand where your coming from!!!

This is really good alot like the way I feel.

This is very good i like alot

Wow...dude sounds like some one I know.

--Lindsey