Beautifully written.
"In a world black and cold
Everything can be sold
Sadness whispers a sweet lie" - deep thought, excellent stanza.
5/5 Keep up!

Excellent piece with a great flow and a very important message in it. Well written 5/5

Excellent write!=)
Very beautiful..deep...Beautiful message portrayed through this
Great job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

So sad and sorrowful,I liked your descriptions in this masterpiece..and I would like to help you to make it perfect as just an opinion

come, do=come to do

Keep it up,
Laura