Chelsey
Wow. What a piece you have written. The feelings of your deep emotions you felt as you worte this piece reall come through. I can understand your feelings. great job!

Stop saying your nuts and you didn't realize what you did
You should be hung by your testicles for harming your little kid
Now you'll rot behind bars wishing you were a better man
With nothing but a mattress and a dirty bedpan

This stanza...carries the feelings of many. Hope he gets what he deserves.
Take Care Cindy

This poem really hit home. A very nice piece of work, great job.

This poem was very nicely expresed......with each word i could feel the anger reaching out to me...very nice.........miranda [randi]