Comments : My Best Friend

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    this was a really good, sweet poem...

    one thing I might do to improve the lookof it, is too break your lines in half:
    Whenever I needed warmth,
    you were there to cuddle me up
    Whenever I needed silence,
    you knew just when to shutup

    you can decide whether or not divide them into stanzas

    Great work!