Wow this is so beaustiful!!! thankyou for writing this!! :):)

Lol sorry before i meant beautiful

Wow! beautifully written and emostion pack that kept me hooked till the end! 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

I really liked the image this poem gave... but like a friend of mine, i think you use too many large and descriptive words together.

description is good but i think what i'm saying is that sometimes it can be too much for the image.

otherwise, i love how this poem was very frank yet very vague. i guess one of those poems where you could make it what you will in some sense. overall, it was very well written.

you have a real knack for making me see a picture when i read.