Comments : Teenage Girl

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    very insightful, SamiJo... I remember well the difficulties of being a teenage girl. I almost think you could have delved farther into this subject... but maybe you have in another poem... anyway, this was very well done and the frustration/struggles were described and explained very well....

    This line:
    somethings can be said or done
    should be "some things" (with a space)

    Split lines in two and make stanzas.