Very very good write, kee up the good work. i am so imressed when i see someone as young as you write something so well.
god bless 5/5

Oh my god that is such a good poem, sorry that u had 2 feel that way in order to write it but hey you never give up... like ur quote says.

I really liked it. It was sad. You showed a lot of true emotion. your last two lines finished it really well.
beautiful poem 5/5

Hey sorry been in that susitaion anyways it was good
~danielle~

I enjoyed this poem. A great read... Keep up the great writting.

Love it

THIS IS REALLY GOOD...I MOST DEFINATELY CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM...DEALING WITH A CONFUSED INDIVIDUAL THAT YOU LOVE IS ALSO HARDER FOR YOU...HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER.