Wow yeah the world can be like that not knowing who you trully are nice poem 5/5

When i tell my my true passion
^^ you wrote "my" twice.

Awhh, this was very heartfelt. I really liked it. It was a unique concept and it was written quite well. The flow was good as were the descriptions. Although I did feel you could have used better vocabulary in some instances. The emotion was strong and clear. Nicely done. 5/5