Sam
This is an awesome piece :) Love the imagery. The love shines in your words.

On awakening to your soft maroon kiss,
I lie next to you in complete bliss.
While you light my heart on fire,
Upon a carpet of gold and sapphire

This stanza is my favorite.
Good luck with the competition.
Excellent!
Thinking of you
Love Cindy

I love this poem! 5/5

Beautiful poem. Im going to keep writing till mine sound like yours.

Very nice poem, i really really like it , and i like how you made it flow so well . :)

Very beautiul poem you composed.

Very beautiful and heartwarming poem on love, enjoyed reading it.

I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

Wow this is an incredivle piece. i really enjoyed reading it. great job! =]

Very very entertaining...so good.