Comments : Our choices

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    What a powerful poem.. i really like the words you chose to describe the differences between light and dark.. excellent write.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =].. oh yea. and that poem i wrote.. it was about a girl i know lol

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "So now we have the choice,
    To do whats right or wrong,
    Can you make that choice?
    For the light or for the dark!
    I guess only time will tell."

    I like the fact that you are comparing light and dark to right and wrong. This was a really interesting and attention grabbing write. Great job. Would definetly love to read more of your poetry.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by What A Beautiful Lie

    Wow, this is a really powerful poem. It's just so well written and has so much meaning. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Wow..thats really deep..I like it...5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Deep man deep. really deep. 5/5 ~KM~