I liked your poem, people sometimes treat us poorly and they expect us to just forgive them like nothing happend. Keep writting poetry, your young and you have great potential, the more you write the better you'll become. Excellent job 5/5

It wsa beautiful...i liked the concept you used..i liked some particular lines..though the flow was sort of off...i do think you deserve a 5/5...you have long way to go..Utilize your talent to the maximum=)

Kp writing!

xxPoojaxx

If I may suggest, perhaps tightening up the lines will enhance its flow? It's a nicely penned piece, nonetheless. It could've been better if you expanded it a bit. It seems to be a portion of a greater poem. But then again, it's fine at its current state. All in all, a good effort. -Marian

I liked this poem. I don't think everything has to always ryhme :) And loved the rush ending very powerful emotions. Great one:)
5/5