Debbie
This is such a beautiful poem. I hope all your dreams come true.

Tortured love to wax and wane
Fingers trace beloved's hand
Prayer and longing one the same
Time's precious gift a grain of sand

This stanza really touched my heart. It holds so much meaning.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Amazing,
Welcome dark dream's embrace
Gentle waves bestow soft lullabye
Tiptoes reach to kiss thy face
Lulled from slumber's lonely cry
loved that part!

"perchance the dream, the dream no more"

i love that line - it almost sounds like shakespeare or something (not that i know much about him, thats just my opinion)

Excellent poem...beautifully penned and the choice of words was great!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

"Fingers trace my beloved's hand"
Words fall short to comment what I feel.
but you know......
Vote?
No vote can mark what is in the heart.

Wow awesome!!! It was really a sad poem ilike this one a lot...GREAT JOB!! keep up the good work...

Wonderful write, brilliantly penned with deep meaning.

Best wishes
chavii.

You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant flow, word choice and thought provoking pieces. Excellent job!

Beautiful! i agree w/ zeenat - tons of "emotions running through it"

As always, Ms. Debbie, a stupendous, eloquent write. This endears me exceedingly, and I was rendered awfully appalled afterwards... a lovely poem... best wishes! Love, Debbie

Marvelous job on this piece, vocabulary was excellent wonderful flow and very deep , always a pleasure to read , another great write by the best thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy dean 5/5

OH OH OH! this. is. BEAUTIFUL. Oh wow. this piece has blown me away. the beauty in this piece is amazing while the concept and content are beautifully portrayed...Just amazing work here.