Wow I really like this one, I have gone through the same thing just with my father. keep up the good work.

Tracy,

This poem means alot as I have jut been through the same thing recently with a friend and the experice has been quite a painful one.

Regards,

Steve

Painfully touching!!
I think i would fall to pieces if i lost my mum. Can only imagine what it woud be like. What an amazing poem, potrays how devastating a disease like cancer is. Take care.

Kelly
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These poems always get to me.
I find it so hard to right in memory of someone so close to me, and really respect when someone can.

In the second stanza I think "complain" would fit better.

Well done on this, the hardest poems to write are those which are for someone.
But they always hold the most emotion.

gooood write =]

I can relate to this poem so much. The one I loved most died of cancer. Great poem.

Very nice! what else would i have expected but another great write!
god bless