Comments : Silence Unyielding

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a sad piece. Great job!

    My hope, dream and plea is for you to live,
    Live for those who love you truly,
    Not for the pain, strength and lives you give,
    Your heart is worth more than all money.

    Hush not the voice of reason.

    I loved this stanza. For there is hope. Great ending
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
    it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
    5/5 love.