Comments : Will I be who they want?

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sweets,

    Your pain screams in this poem. I'd do anything to take all that pain away if I could, I hope you know that. You're an angel, && you don't deserve this. Try to stay strong && don't give up, no matter what. && I'm sure that your mom && dad are very proud of you. Why wouldn't they be? Your incredibly strong && so kind in everything you do.
    So hold on. I love you.

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

    P.s. Love the poem hun. Your writing skills are improving everytime you write a new poem. Fabulous job. =] 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by John

    I got a few tears there, When i read poems like that i put it like what if that was me and my parents. I'm sure they are verry proud of you. Your poem was great i would give it a 5.5 too! Keep up the work! Stay strong!