Again, i agree with the message of this poem, you write from your heart that is why it touches me right away. keep it up.
you are so talented.5/5

Really good. Clear message, simple but effective, strong emtion. I can't offer you any critism, to me this was excellent, all the way around 5/5

Great with a nice msg n the flow is koOL. This a good work. I gave u 5/5

The best advice for anybody is just be yourself, people are always concerned about how others feel, but at the end of the day who's more important? If your happy being you while never being fake, you'll always have room to smile no matter what. Fantastic job good flow 5/5

If the whole world followed ur advice it would be a seriously cool planet!!!! great writing - you're seriously talented!!!!!!