Aaah so sad. I could feel the sincerity in your lines. Very beautifully crafted.

"I cried and the look on your face
Made me feel so pretty."
^^^ Such a sad, yet sweet line.

I really enjoyed this write. The flow was superb and the style was original and creative!

Oh man. I loved this poem SO much. Flowed so smoothe and freely. I just love it. I don't know what else to say. You're one of the best writers on here. Never stop? =]

Ily.

` Liz =]

This piece was absolutely heartrending to read. The sincerity of your composition induces a sense of melancholic pain to its readers, and this may have come from the writer's heart and soul... I really enjoyed reading this bittersweet work.

Take care now.

-Marian

I like it.well done.keep this up.

"Tell me something so typical
A lullaby or something miserable"

i love those lines right there...wow, amazing work!

Nice

This is really awsome! You are a great writer!

So beautifully sad....wonderful flow and emotions...

"Tell me something so typical
A lullaby or something miserable"

loves those lines^...all in all very enjoyable and heartbreaking....keep writing!....All the best, Debbie

Wow this is amazing. I've never read anything like it. I give it a 5/5. Keep up the amazing work.

Another sad yet powerful write.... each of your writes holds the readers attention, bringing them in to feel your words and leaves them waiting for the next poem to be wrtten..... wonderful Sarah, simply wonderful.