Beautiful piece, excellently written. I'm big fan of your work. Keep writing. 5/5 (as always).

This, I can relate to so much. When I was younger then I am now, like maybe in 3rd grade, I would always wish on the star that my new crush would have a crush on me, and like in fairytales, live happily ever after. But fate is a B!^@# isn't it? Leaving you to try and grasp what isn't going to be yours, teasing your emotions and whatnot.

5/5 always,

Quillx

I love this one! i can relate to this. its soo true! 5/5!!

xo kisses xo

This is a wonderful poem. it was well written. 5/5

Kalee

OMG i love this peom...its a great poem...well written and everything. Flawless. (Well i think so anyway

sincerely yours,

uwouldntno