I loved this it was kinda short but ic an relate good job:) ~melissaraye~ maybe you can check out some of my poems

Really Good poem..

Good poem, just hope you didnt write it cuz of me.

Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
5/5 love.

I loved it, beautifully written. i added you to my fave hope you don't mind. but the poem was awesome. the structure was great the wording was perfect and i just loved it. well done 5/5

"Life's a head ache with no aspirin to calm it...
Life's a deathly tune playing to a broken metronome..."

Such a poweful piece
Short but hits with such force
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I loved it very much its a very simple one but it full with deep meaninges :):):)

keep it up:):):) matt:):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

I LOVE IT!!5/5
<3Amber

p.s.-please read mine

I loved your poem! it was amazing. keep it up.

mandyxxxxx

Amazinggg. I love itt. <3 =]

- Chloe. xox