"We will never know the truth of life
until we stop looking at it through closed eyes."

These lines are really powerful and meaningful. What you are saying is extremely true. I like the fact that you kept repeating "We" it made me feel more engaged and it gives the feeling that the poem is directed at the reader. When will people open their eyes? Thats the question.

Take Care.

I loved it girl:):):) very much :):):)

coz it is the true no one can deny it:):)

gud work girl & keep up :):):)

Very good and clever..hehehe

That was an awesome poem..everytime i read it i love it more..."BLUSHING"..hehehe
-gone forever-
take care

Wow....that was really good.seriously. and it is so true. love ya cuz!!

Really good poem.
Like the structure, the rhyming.
Take care