"You've broke[n] my heart a million times..."

I really like the concluding stanza. It was bittersweet. The whole tone of the poem induces a sense of melancholic pain from a heartbreak in me. Nice work, nonetheless.

Take care now.

Nice work Matt. I can't write this much.. to time consuming.

Great poem. really i liked it alot.

Very nice one. 5/5. i'll quote marian above "The whole tone of the poem induces a sense of melancholic pain from ur heartbreak". that's what i liked about it. plus ur writting style which similar to mine. check out my poems i will too

You know guys, i'm not even really heartbroken. I just write about it, cause I can somehow identify. Eh.

Ur poem is really good...i like it..i can actualyl feel ur pain!! lol