Nice one! he is ur world. no one else but u sees it or understands it. it's just the way it is n thx 4 sharing. 4.5/5 shit doesn't exist will have to settle for 4/5 not quite Excellent... to me.

I like this poem but i have to give u 4/5. but you are right about one thing. my favorite sentence is "big girls don't cry". Same here. One boy i love so much who doesnt want my heart to keep in his heart. I loved him and now my mind of him have been faded away. Long story. i have a lot of sad love poems about him and maybe you can read some of them if you want to. it sucks when he doesnt love me more than just friend but he love me as just friend. it still sucks but be careful because you dont want yourself to feel deep pain later in future. ive been through a lot of pains because of him. so, good poem. keep up!

I like this poem but i have to give u 4/5. but you are right about one thing. my favorite sentence is "big girls don't cry". Same here. One boy i love so much who doesnt want my heart to keep in his heart. I loved him and now my mind of him have been faded away. Long story. i have a lot of sad love poems about him and maybe you can read some of them if you want to. it sucks when he doesnt love me more than just friend but he love me as just friend. it still sucks but be careful because you dont want yourself to feel deep pain later in future. ive been through a lot of pains because of him. so, good poem. keep up!
-K