"Thats when you held out your soft delicate hand and proved me to be wrong,
inside your palm was the key i had tossed, you caught it.
Its been there all along."

This was a great poem because I was captivated from the beginning to the end. How you ended it was really engaging, it was really sweet. Great write.

Take Care.

Cool story n i liked that metaphore!! 4/5

Awe! ur poem is so sweet. i know this feeling. You mind if i use ur idea to make up my poem with this kind of thing? but its a 5/5 its actualy wow

I loved this. It is just so cute! and so true!