Wow.
That was beautiful.
The emotion was strong.

This stanza had me wanting to read more,

Everything starts like a fairy tale;
With a craziness you submit yourself with lust.
You cannot think that time you are just,
Nothing but a child.

Great Job!

_Amber_

Beautiful poem with a nice flow and perfect wordings. Great piece really

I really like this one again with many of your poems I really feel the emotion and you create an amazing afect witht he repitition of Nothing but a child I really likes this one.

Very sad poem. I loved the repeition of "Nothing but a child". That was very effective and it kept me drawn into the poem. As for the topic, I think it's great that you dedicated this to mothers who lost their husbands. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Such a sad poem but i can feel hw true u were while writing it
very gd
i'll add u 2 my favorite
keep writing u'r so talented
nadine

This is great. keep up the great work. 5/5

Wow another wonderful sad poem and i liked how you used nothing but a child. My ex always called me a child.

Another perfect poem doll i think i shed a tear.5/5 write on!!