I read your poem and found it quite an easy read and a pleasant piece. Keep up the good words. May the ebb and flow of your thoughts and emotions find a good spot to call home.

Darkness creeps in
As the sun cascades,
down from the auburn sky
Slowly, then, materializes- the moon
In front of my very eyes

Wow superb descriptions. I loved reading it. 5/5

Beautiful poem.
Nice piece of writing.

This is very good...the best poem i've read tonight.

WOW!!
Really aweosme poem.... and little mindblowing... In short, your poems is cool, Keep up this good work :D