Wow....that's powerful..is it about someone or is that just how you felt at that moment??
I liked it though and I think you have talent and you should keep on writting how your feeling and whatnot...Great Job.

Beck

Its short..thats for sure. but i like it. it has a lot of heart and emotion in it :) great job. i think you meant to say "Your life is a joke and your funeral will be the
Punch line" but spelling mistakes are common. cant wait to read more! 5/5