Comments : One love

  • 16 years ago

    by deceitfulXkisses

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I really like this poem. It's sad but it's really good and I can relate to it in a way. Good job!

    Kelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this was really short & sad. but you did an amazing job writing it. loved the rhyming pattern. keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    Really...really...really great poem...
    short but simple..the words went together...like they are just ment to be there... one of the best short wrights ive ever red...5/5 will recomend your name to a few poets....kepp up the great work in the mean time...have to let everyone know..how great ur words slide :)
    jesz xox