Comments : Lethal love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    You know, men likes those are a waste in this world. Seriously, they're idiots. They'd think it's fun to play around with girl's feelings. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I will just say, you have a talent that only the best will recieve.
    you show emotion in your words, you are true to what you write.
    thankyou for an aweosme read
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    Great poem!! I love the mood that you convey to the reader, mature tone, I love the style.. and especially like this stanza
    "There's a war in my conscience
    Both sides are fighting strong
    on whether I should win or die
    who knows which side is right or wrong?"5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    "and never again though of me" I think it is supposed to be thought of me. Just thought I'd point that out. This poem is deep and very intense. I love the line "who knows which side is right or wrong" It is very deep. I love the way the poem showed how much u loved that man w/o really saying it. 5/5 for me. !!! good job love.