Comments : I swear

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    It was a delightful read. (^^,)

  • 16 years ago

    by desigirl

    Cute poem, but if you show it to BOB Shank he is not going to call it a poem because you have used (I) over and over, that is the only thing he dislike when we write poetry.lol.
    I wrote you that just for fun and for your info as I think you have done a sweet job.

    thank you for reading my poems.