Comments : I Tried

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    I really like this. i know how you're feeling. but trust me, things WILL get better. i know that's typically cliche. but i felt just like this about two years ago and things are so much better now. i hope you find what makes you happy in life. and great job on the poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Pretty good. really liked the 1st paragraph, not so much the rest... 4/5 for the 1st and the topic and ideas and feelings that are in this poem which is deep but maybe could have turned up better... sorry being true