Very nice write, keep up the good work!
god bless

Thank you! dawn green.. tell you honestly it is my first time to write here!!;P

Great poem!
it flowed so well and you can feel the emotion :]

get some more poems up :P

Thank you morgan!

Thank you razan!!

Excellent poem sweety=)...for the first one you've posted...great job!...the emotion was well penned
The flow was smooth and the whole poem held power and beauty=)

Kp up the good job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

I find this first poem of yours rather bittersweet. In any case, it was my delight to read it. Keep writing and your star will eventually outshine the sun. =]

-Marian

Hey,
a lovely poem hun! especially for the first time, its really sweet and the flow is good.
keep on writing and keep up the good work!!
you deserve a 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

Great job.keep up the good work.

Good job on your poem. Keep writing :)
Take care Cindy

This was a beautifully penned piece of poetry 5/5 keep writing!