Comments : Mother's watch

  • 16 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    Stunning poem. i really like it. You're a talented poet. Keep writing. All the best.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Aww that was a nice poem... i lyk it 2... 5/5 :) oh by d way Ems thx 4 d comment on mine.. ^____^ laterz

  • 16 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    Very nice, 5/5

    i love your poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Albert

    This is so heart coldening

    i love it so much

    it made me cry

    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that was rlly good!

    the time for you is near.
    to enter the heaven's gate.
    i would sit here by your side.
    until our journey is complete.

    ^that was so amazing... i loved that stanza.. wonderful job, and thanks for the comments... 5/5 from me, and keep up the great work.