A very good use of words in this one! The line:
breathless beauty

Formed an image in my mind. I don't quite understand the topic of this poem, but other than that, great job. Keep it up, and I look forward to reading other poems that you have written :D

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

Thanks. i just started writing....

This is a breath- taking piece. Its uniqueness and beauty is priceless. Wonderful imagery and wording.